This is well-written and structured. The sounds and samples you chose feel like they belong, which is fantastic.
My initial criticisms are: could use more reverb, the intro sound is a bit harsh on the ears, and the melody could be much more complex. It's almost too simple. The instruments don't blend too well together yet, as far as the mix goes. You could definitely dive into the details here and come out with a fantastic finished project. I mean all of this with the best intentions.
Thanks for your detailed review xD Since this is my 2nd take at this kind of song, i feel that i lack the needed experience to make an awesome track. Maybe if i do what you said my next track will be a big hit :D
Awesome! Guitars sound super tight. Nice work.
Thanks for listening!
I like the dark theme in this. The piano has a very fitting tone. Good work!
Fun to listen to! Well done.
Very motivational. Good work!
Thank you Stadler. That's all I every pursue to do in music and that is to inspire others, so I appreciate that.
Really nice work. Had an intense moment reading your description with your song in the background!
Love it. Fascinating that you wrote this without hearing it. Makes me want to give it a try!
You should! It's a great learning experience!
Awesome! Super fun to listen to.
Thanks! I'm glad you like it!
This is too good! Love it.
Thank you! I'm happy you enjoyed it~!
I definitely enjoyed it! Nicely done.
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